User talk:Stryker/Hedoro (3.5e Race)

Comments

 * 1) Making skills class skills (instead of just giving bonuses), Ki attack, and morphic supremacy are more class features than racial traits…One could always replace the highly annoying LA with two HD. (Here is an example race.)
 * 2) Intimidate does not sound like what you are looking for; perhaps a concentration bonus.
 * 3) “They can also survive the empty void of space.” Does this mean they do not need to breath? Biology can function in zero-gravity zones (something only a few types of extremophiles can do on earth)? They do not need to eat? Have resistance to radiation or direct light? When this is clarified, it would be best if the mechanics were also found under Racial Traits.
 * 4) Shapechanger is noted as a subtype – what do they turn into? Does the fact that they are Oozes allow them to be able to slightly manipulate their physical features (hence the subtype)? Or is their shape static – allowing for identifying marks and more individuality? If they can slightly change appearance, perhaps a +5 or +10 to disguise checks.
 * 5) What are your thoughts on integrating them with the Zeitgeist? --Franken Kesey 04:29, 21 May 2012 (UTC)


 * I've never bothered to figure out how HD interact with ECL and what not. I've heard multiple different things about it and it's a jumbled mess of confusion to me now. If you're willing to make the changes to HD go ahead. I find the racial traits to be perfectly fine as is.
 * I made this race nearly 3 years ago, if concentration were what I was looking for then it would be concentration by now.
 * This is all clarified in the physical description section.
 * I have forgotten the basis of them being shapechangers. Note that this was an extremely bad attempt to copy Eiji's Noo race, but with a different origin and culture. I have no qualms with it being deleted as I find it to be unfinished and my need to refine it is non-existent.
 * If you would like to adopt this race and integrating them with your Zeitgeist race, then feel free, keep in mind there main driving point is that they are like Ki-manipulating (think DBZ) ooze-like humanoids. They could be a subordinate race of the Zeitgeist or whatever you wish. Basically I'm done with this race, and have been for some time hence the unrefined nature of it.--Stryker 07:10, 22 May 2012 (UTC)