Talk:Sreip's Haste Vision (3.5e Spell)

Questions/Comments
"Once per round, you can make a spot check as a free action."

Generally spot checks are free actions. Do you mean "make a spot check to spot something you failed to see previously"?

"You are immune to being flanked, like the Improved Uncanny Dodge class feature of the barbarian. Note that, just like the class feature, you can still be sneak attacked by a creature who has at least 4 more rogue levels than your casterlevel."

Maybe you should reword to: "You gain Improved Uncanny Dodge like the barbarian class feature, substituting your caster level as your effective barbarian level". --Aarnott 16:15, 20 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Both good points. I thought making a spot check as a free action was a house rule of ours, but I now see it is the default for some checks. The second sentence is indeed clearer that way and providing a link to the original rules text is a good idea. I have made the necessary edits. Thanks a lot for the feedback by the way, this is not something of major importance to me but it feels very welcoming to receive constructive comments on something that I thought was a small private project. Thanks again! -- Anarril 01:36, 21 September 2011 (UTC)


 * We have a pretty good sized group of regulars who watch new stuff that gets put up, so I wouldn't be surprised if more of your work gathered comments as well :-). I've been watching your work, for instance, and trying to decide if I like the spell level it's going in at.


 * Minor quibble about the fluff here - you mention rogues teleporting in and how they won't be a problem. There's two of them, they're using a level 5 spell effect, and you have a level 1 spell effect up... that sounds to me like they won't be a problem because you won't be around long enough to worry :-p. - Tarkisflux Talk 03:52, 21 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, thanks again for the suggestions. It's very useful to have a second viewpoint! I have also edited the fluff, its better this way :-). - Anarril 20:48, 27 September 2011 (UTC)