Talk:Haunt (3.5e Spell)

Ratings
I'm amazed... this was created months ago, and i've already admitted it's a bad spell. here, if it makes you happier...

Unfortunetly this is the first time I've ever seen "Body Outside of Body" looking at the spell, I have to agree it's practically the same thing. The wu jen limitation is unfortunate. I also have to agree, using a spell like this would greatly slow down the action... --Snafusam (talk) 20:48, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

It Reads as if Something is
I get what you're trying to get at with this spell, but the wording is too sparse and just doesn't mesh well enough to work as it is. Even the flavor sentence reads awkwardly. It has the double comma which can be read as "everything between these commas is sort of optional extra material like in parentheses". Read your flavor sentence again with that in mind and you'll see what I mean there. Also, is this based on copyrighted material? If so, put the copyright disclaimer on there. --Ganteka Future (talk) 16:47, 10 May 2013 (UTC)


 * i get where your going with the grammer and thank you for helping :D, the basic material is old Dota back when it was a WC3 map. to my knowledge it's copyrighted. but because of how many changes are needed for the purpose of making it D&D play-able. it becomes "a variant of" the source. does it still need a disclaimer, if so how should i word it? Snafusam (talk) 13:52, 10 May 2013


 * We've got a handy template that's easy to use. Check it out here for the really basic instructions and the formatting you can copy for pasting: Template:Copyright Disclaimer. Just copy the text in the white dotted box on that page (or retype it manually on your article, since that's easy too with only two words and four total brackets) and place where it needs to be on any article you've based off copyrighted material. --Ganteka Future (talk) 21:30, 10 May 2013 (UTC)


 * LMAO @ the template...  thank you Ganteka Future again for the assistance :D Snafusam (talk)