Talk:Veles Whirl (3.5e Spell)

Balance and Level

This is either High or Very High balance (not moderate). Further, the level is low for the effects (better a level 7 or 8). --Franken Kesey 19:14, 25 June 2018 (MDT)

Contributor

For the amount of time and effort that Eiji-kun put into making your idea usable, he should become a contributor. --Franken Kesey 19:14, 25 June 2018 (MDT)

Good point. I've gone ahead and done that. --Luigifan18 (talk) 14:23, 27 June 2018 (MDT)

Effects

The article mentions the "center" of vortex a few times, how much of it is considered the center (i.e. central 5 feet, 10 feet, etc.)? Do creatures that can burrow get a bonus against this effect; and are flying creatures affected more? --Franken Kesey 19:14, 25 June 2018 (MDT)

Rating

	Franken Kesey likes this article and rated it 3 of 4.
	With the above being said, this is an awesome spell! Good effects, well described, but to the point. Keep making articles like this one. Fix and answer the above questions, and I may give this a 4/4.