Ratings
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Canlin Undrosh likes this article and rated it 3 of 4. |
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| Based on how they view other races they seem like they'd be a pacifistic race, yet they are an honorable warrior race with no discrimination towards anyone. This strikes me as odd, but it is an interesting race and is overall balanced in my opinion. |
My Edit
Canlin Undrosh (talk) 13:42, 4 March 2020 (UTC) I've made some clarity Edits, and I hope this is enough to keep the page from being deleted. I've fixed The capitalization errors, the grammar errors I found and the formatting of the Racial Traits. I fixed some wording and made it a bit easier to follow. Overall I made changes but believe they maintain the original intent of the work as the guidelines state for clarity edits. I disagree with the reasoning in the Winter Cleaning banner that racial names should be lower case in sentences. In regular grammar ethnic groups Must be capitalized as they are proper nouns such as African, Latino, or Caucasian.
