Talk:Aeroversatile (3.5e Equipment)
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Eiji-kun likes this article and rated it 3 of 4. |
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| Looks reasonable, I mostly like how you can melee javelins out of this. |
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Already rated it and I stand by it, but since I'm on a critique roll there are some things that need fixing.
First of all, spell and grammar checks are your friend. This ones rife with it. Still, let's carry on. This is an item template which makes weapons able to be used in both melee and ranged by either granting or improving throwing range, or giving melee capability to projectiles. That's cool. Not sure why the name Aeroversatile since that makes me think specifically of things intended to be airborne only, but whatever.
Not sure why you limited to such a tiny list. Wouldn't it be easier to just let it be applied to whatever? It's not like it makes greatswords a good throwing choice since non-light weapons have their own issues unrelated to this.
"When a weapon is aeroversatile it gains an additional range of 15 feet when thrown and an additional range increment of 15 feet."
I think you repeated yourself there.
This is listed under Weapon Enhancement. It's not. Here, steal the formatting from Orgacraft (3.5e Equipment), the page should probably look like this.
Needs formatting and clarity. -- Eiji-kun (talk) 03:02, 23 June 2018 (MDT)
