View source for Talk:Rogue Astral Construct (3.5e Race)

== Ratings ==
{{Rating |rater=Eiji-kun
|rating=neutral
|reason=Per request, I'm here to rate.  I actually do like this, but I am putting neutral here for the moment to deal with a few issues.

One non-issue issue is that the fluff is overwhelmingly chaotic good, not lawful good.  The "Muh Freedoms" thing is pretty much an archetype of it.  Easy enough.  The fluff could use a bit of parsing down while keeping it funny.

But the real issue is the construct ability list.  It makes sense, I expect it, but on that list even as low as list A is flight, and flight is a hard thing to sell at LA 0.  I am not sure what you could do: possibly exclude flight.  Have the flight scale by starting off with gliding only first.  Something.  If you can find a fix for that, this becomes a Like.
}}

I'll do more fluff parsing later. Lawful-Chaotic always confuses me, like what is Diplomacy on this spectrum? Individual choice and freedom says Chaotic but it's a law system so it's Lawful? My reasoning there is a Lawful Good character can oppose slavery which is their main tick, not laws. I picked Lawful Good because righteous paladins running around freeing slaves is what popped into my head with their first incarnation.

== Copy Pasta ==

You got some ATRun in your RAC. -- [[User:Eiji-kun|Eiji-kun]] ([[User talk:Eiji-kun|talk]]) 15:22, 6 February 2017 (MST)

:I did say I was copying the construct traits from the ATRuns page for convenience. I did not even think to edit the race name to fit RAC. I'll do that now - [[User:Aeturo|Aeturo]] ([[User talk:Aeturo|talk]]) 16:34, 6 February 2017 (MST)

: And fixed. I really liked the ATRuns construct typing as a way to get 0 LA from the construct type but I didn't even think to change the 11 instances of ATRuns to RAC - [[User:Aeturo|Aeturo]] ([[User talk:Aeturo|talk]]) 16:38, 6 February 2017 (MST)

:: It completely fine to take text from other articles, in fact I encouraged it. It add a lot of consistency in the system, where similar wording create precedent. --[[User:Leziad|Leziad]] ([[User talk:Leziad|talk]]) 16:44, 6 February 2017 (MST)