This article needs to be re-written
This article has a lot of the basic structure in place but needs a re-write for the following reasons:
- The article contains game stats: These need to be removed, and replaced with a text based description of the Insectare as they would appear to a character within the Spelljammer universe.
- Blank sections: These need to be filled in or removed.
- There are no citations: Inline citations need to be added to the text, so that other editors can see where specific information comes from. In a simple one or two line article that is based on only one element of canon, this might not be so important, but when something is in more than one gamebook, other editors (and readers) may wish to verify specific facts, by returning to the source. A bibliography does not provide as much help as specific references. (In this specific case, I do know that an Insectare appears in, at least one of the Cloakmaster Cycle novels, so that may provide 'facts' that the MC does not.
I may do some of this work myself, but just wanted to explain why the 'Unreferenced' template is up, and why I might be tinkering with this.
However, having said that, it is great to have some re-enforcements over here! David Shepheard 17:09, January 3, 2010 (UTC)