Talk:Undead Lake Monster (3.5e Monster)
Tactics 'n' Treasure[edit]
Half of the description of Surpise Strike should probably be in a combat tactics section, not an ability description section. Also, are you trying to imply that the monster can only uncoil like that if nobody says "I fight it"?
Saying that treasure several hundred feet below the surface of a lake is hard to get makes no sense when you're talking about a CR 15 creature. Mentioning rusted nonmagical items as though they were relevant is a little flavorful, but mostly distracting. --Foxwarrior (talk) 03:44, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
I Changed it. Most of the text comes from the ADnD entry about it so there's going to be some confusion. really, I'm not sure if CR 15 is accurate, but I'll be throwing this at my DnD group to see. Psychowarrior (talk) 23:15, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
