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It had been a while since I got on, but I did complete the class in my notepad. Here it is, I hope that it meets the "Completion Standards" of dnd-wiki.
 
It had been a while since I got on, but I did complete the class in my notepad. Here it is, I hope that it meets the "Completion Standards" of dnd-wiki.
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:It's coo'.  I made some grammar and formatting changes, typoes and whatnot.  I did make a few mechanical edits to what I think you meant, namely "the DC is 10 + 1/2 level + Con modifier" and "1 dexterity damage".  Pretty sure 10 + your entire level + Con was a typo (that would be nuts!), and a -1 dexterity penalty with no listed duration wouldn't heal normally at all, so I was certain you meant damage.
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:Check the formatting as it is now, it'll be helpful for figuring it in the future.  Specifically how to make {{Su}} look like it does.
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:Reading the class itself, it seems to be a fighter who explodes.  And doesn't explode for that much damage, or that often either.  While this doesn't make it much stronger than the fighter itself, and thus probably worth the Moderate balance, its such a minor component I have to wonder "why?"  You'd think the class was built around exploding, but this is mostly just a [[SRD:Fighter]]. -- [[User:Eiji-kun|Eiji-kun]] ([[User talk:Eiji-kun|talk]]) 04:03, 24 February 2017 (MST)

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Apologies

It had been a while since I got on, but I did complete the class in my notepad. Here it is, I hope that it meets the "Completion Standards" of dnd-wiki.

It's coo'. I made some grammar and formatting changes, typoes and whatnot. I did make a few mechanical edits to what I think you meant, namely "the DC is 10 + 1/2 level + Con modifier" and "1 dexterity damage". Pretty sure 10 + your entire level + Con was a typo (that would be nuts!), and a -1 dexterity penalty with no listed duration wouldn't heal normally at all, so I was certain you meant damage.
Check the formatting as it is now, it'll be helpful for figuring it in the future. Specifically how to make (Su) look like it does.
Reading the class itself, it seems to be a fighter who explodes. And doesn't explode for that much damage, or that often either. While this doesn't make it much stronger than the fighter itself, and thus probably worth the Moderate balance, its such a minor component I have to wonder "why?" You'd think the class was built around exploding, but this is mostly just a SRD:Fighter. -- Eiji-kun (talk) 04:03, 24 February 2017 (MST)