User talk:Timplate/Abyssal Decent (3.5e Template)
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Fluffykittens opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4. |
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| Unfinished rehash. |
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Eiji-kun opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4. |
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| Is this even finished? |
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Ganteka Future opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4. |
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| Decent: Adj 1. conforming to the recognized standard of propriety, good taste, modesty, etc., as in behavior or speech. Word choice aside, this is 4 HD, some boring features, some stuff that's wrong, and also the Fiendish template apparently. Just... no for PCs flat out, because your 4 levels will be better spent on class levels that let you do things. For monsters...there are already other templates that are more interesting and actually scale monsters a bit better than this attempts to do. This feels like an early, rough draft than a final published article. Sandbox it or delete it. |
It doesn't look like you're done yet, but
FYI, Outsider is a type, not a subtype.
Also your formatting is weird. I don't know if they are placeholders or not, but it looks unfinished. -- Eiji-kun (talk) 21:59, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
