Talk:Virtue Domain (5e Divine Domain)

Ratings

	Rlyehable dislikes this article and rated it 1 of 4.
	Virtue domain is a brilliant idea. Needs a little rewriting (see notes below).

Constructive Comments

First let me say that I wish that the domain was written in a deity-neutral (rather than deity-specific) style. Virtue as a domain is a great concept.

Domain Spells: Well thought-out with the possible exception of dimension door, which seems out of place.

Wispering Omen: Access to greater restoration at 2nd level is a bit much. Yes, I realize you have set a limit on it by allowing it only once. But, it may be better to state that it is gained at a higher level (9th ?).

Spell Mirror: Casting the countered spell for free is a bit much. I would suggest the cleric still have to spend a spell slot of appropriate level. But this still gives it the ability to cast non-cleric spells.

Otherworldly Reach: What is the duration? Needs some limitations. Action to cast, bonus action to move resistance, etc. It should have some reasonable duration. And make the 'once per long rest' apply to both parts of the ability.

Virtuous Favor: Interesting concept, but again, I wish that it was written in a deity-neutral style.

Once more, some interesting concepts. --Rlyehable (talk) 02:16, 11 February 2020 (UTC)