User talk:Freeman210/Deadman (3.5e Class)

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	Ganteka Future opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
	Reading this is like… it's like this article is from a different game system or something. Lots of unexplained or missing class features, undefined terminology… it's really just confusing all around. Can we not have this here? I'd really prefer if we didn't have this here.

	Undead Knave opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
	As before, so after.

	Leziad opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
	Same concern as Eiji here.

Eiji-kun opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.

Oh god... it's Deadman Wonderland. I will try to be unbiased here. However, we've got problems. The saves are borked. There are dead levels everywhere. Things like (Ex) or (Su) are missing. The actual abilities are as weak as they are unflavorful. And it seems to imply that activating these abilities might be a free action (otherwise, why the thing about activating more than one power at once?) which is just broken. NOPE.

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"You deal one point of damage for each cut you make." What kind of damage is this, what action does it take to perform, is this mitigated by DR/ER/whatever, and does it require any special materials to perform?

"When you go to use more then one ability at a time in and out of combat you must make a Fort save, starting at a dc of 20 or go unconscious do to Anemia." How is "ability" defined for the sake of this, how long does the unconsciousness last, is it influenced by immunity to unconsciousness and/or immunity to bleeding?

"At 12th Level they will only lose half their current HP. At 20th Level you will lose a quarter of their current HP." Why do you start losing HP at 12th level, when before you simply went unconscious for an undefined period of time?

"Every time you roll a 19 or 20 on the d20 lower the dc of the Fort save by 1. If you lower the dc to 0 you no longer have to make any Fort save while using a lot of your own blood." Are you referring to the previous ability here? If not, this is nonsensical.

"After defeating a enemy you can drain the blood of your enemy to heal yourself. See the chart below for sizes on how much they will heal you." What kind of action is this, is it influenced by them/you having blood, is the percentage of their health or your health, is this an (ex) (su) or (sp) ability?

"claw/gun" What is the range increment on the gun, what is the crit of both, are these considered natural/manufactured attacks, are they considered magical for purposes of interacting with effects, are these considered (ex) (sp) (su)?

"The Deadman must have a cut on each limb or the deadman can make the armor out of one cut but must make a Fort save or go unconscious." How does this work mechanically?

"At 1st character level you add half your con modifier(rounded down) to your AC. At 10th character level you add your con modifier to your AC." How long does this last? Does it stack with similar abilities? What type of bonus is this? Is this (ex), (su), or (sp)?

"It creates a shield that will block projectiles. There's a 20% chance that it will block magic missile. Add your con modifier for ranged attacks only. The shield has 15 HP. This locks Crow Claw, Fists of Blood." Is this a physical SRD:Shields that adds to AC, something that works like the SRD:Shield spell, a damage absorbing Shield (3.5e Creature Ability), or something different?

"Choosing this Branch of Sin will set your blood on fire no matter which Branch of Sin you are using." What mechanical effect does this have?

"Thick Blood A 5th level Deadman thickens his blood to give him a little natural armor. At 5th he gains a +2 to natural armor. Every 4th level after it goes up by another 2." Is this (ex), (su), or (sp)?

"Blood Well The dead man finds out how to store extra blood to restore his HP at 5th level. The blood well has a max of 20, inceasing every 3 levels of his max HP stored by 5. At the start of his turn roll a d10 to see how much he heals for the Blood Well." How does this function mechanically? Is this a reservoir of temporary HP that replenishes? If so, does this take an action to use? Is this (ex), (su), or (sp)? --Fluffykittens (talk) 09:17, 12 April 2015 (UTC)