Talk:Fleet Ship (3.5e Location)

List of Faults and Solutions

Obviously much needs doing with this page and sub-pages. Perhaps it gets a bit to detailed - reaching for what I no longer have time to fully explain. I just need a list of faults - and ways to improve them. Please understand I cannot spend as much time as before on this site. Your patients will be most appreciated. --Franken Kesey 23:20, 9 October 2011 (UTC)

I admit I haven't spent much time with this page, but one thing stood out after looking it over. It seems to be a lot of lists, lacking fluff or descriptive text or a reason for me to care about it. Probably the first thing I would do here is write a paragraph per section, if not more, to introduce them and get a reader interested in what the section is there for. I don't know what being in the first or third caste even means, for example, so spending page space on it seems like a missed opportunity or just really weird.

As for the subpages, most of the deleted ones are just headers, lacking substantive content of any sort. I think I would probably not worry about recreating them, especially if you are running into other time pressures, and instead focus on providing a general guideline for each sector on this page. You could collapse the Commerce page into a few paragraphs about each of the facilities and provide some vague bonus guidelines and not lose much IMO. - Tarkisflux ^Talk 01:00, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

1: Removed subpages, and fluffed them. (I cannot get the final table to work. I was trying to get the picture place to the left of table, in all fields.)

2: Destroyed all the standings and casts - yet left the descriptions of relative relations.

3: Will get an intro paragraph, for article, in shortly. (I have had trouble in the past trying to not repeat something lower down.)

4: Do you know of any better pictures?

5: Right now there are only 3 tables left. And there is a intro paragraph to two.

What else needs fixing? Only the Cosmopolis Dock is finished because, I want feedback before putting time in any of the other docks. Also, I will add a core floor-plan shortly, with where each district is located. Thank you --Franken Kesey 02:41, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

Picture

My software is being finicky lately... In short I need sombody to upload [this picture, and crop it such that only the 3rd one down remains. This will be the new picture of Nyota Mji. --Franken Kesey 09:27, 16 October 2011 (UTC)