User talk:DraconicMan/Bionic Speedster (3.5e Class)

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	Sulacu dislikes this article and rated it 1 of 4.
	To be honest, I don't see anything particularly terrible here, besides that massively overpowered Movement Focus capstone ability, or anything terribly confusing, besides the Bionic Adaptation thing. On the other hand, I don't see anything remotely interesting either. If those two points of contention would be fixed, I'd probably have rated it neutral

Spanambula opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.

Seeing as you put no actual thought or work into your articles here, I see no reason I should put any into explaining my opposition to your horrible work, and yet here I go. There's a button marked "Preview" next to the button that saves your page when making a class. Click it, it'll be all right, I promise. Okay. See the stuff in red? That probably means you should fix something. Can you see any text <-surrounded by these things?-> You should do something about those before marking the status as COMPLETE. Do you see any text with [[these or these]]? You should fix those too. Ugh.

	Leziad opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.
	The capstone alone would be worth an oppose. Nevermind the whole class.

Eiji-kun opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.

After Bionic Commando, I'm burnt out. In comparison this seems almost workable. Oh, it's crap. It's a pile of random bonus feats, AC bonuses, and movement bonuses with pretty much nothing holding it together. And it still had the "gain a level" capstone nonsense, and "intangible" nonsense, but hey.... F instead of F- is an improvement, right? Listen. You keep writing "intangible". You know that's not a thing, that's not a term in D&D right? There's incorporeal. There's gaseous. There's even blink, if you want to go that route. Stop where you are, go find the SRD and browse it a while. Get yourself familiar with the terms. And for the love of god, please respond to at least one of the talk pages somewhere. Your silence is deafening, as your articles are maddening. We're not danddwiki, we actually care what goes on the site.

Fluffykittens opposes this article and rated it 0 of 4.

"Note:Any character with a speedster level may not gain the run feet unless they have 10 level 2 bionic classes." Wat why "Each level a speedster becomes higher based on level" Unfortunately, nobody has made rules for getting high yet. "Bionic Adaptation:At level 10 a Bionic commando has learned all it can for this, it may be a level one during this level in either of the other 2 bionic classes without needing any extra exp." Does this give you a free level? Cause that's terrible. Overall, abilities don't have a type (Ex? Su?) and are poorly worded to a massive degree.